Hey guys,
I am working on a new screenplay and would love your split second reaction to this opening page.
Does it grab your attention? Are you intrigued? Do you want to know what happens next?
Any thoughts…positive, negative, inflammatory…are welcomed.
And so the new story begins
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Not bad 🙂 I am a bit curious as to what happens next.
Thanks…that’s exactly what I want!
It’s interesting. I’m definitely intrigued and I want to figure out what’s going on. I would for sure keep reading.
I posted my screenplay summary on my blog today. If you’re interested, take a look at it and let me know what you think.
http://oshitbritt.wordpress.com/2013/12/16/on-the-sisters-of-joy/
Thanks, Britt…I’ll pop over and take a look!